Random Thoughts or Observations Six Hundred and Fifty Nine

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Random Thoughts or Observations Six Hundred and Fifty Nine

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-04-22 07:15 AM

The mist envelops the predawn light
Muting the glow of morn’s twilight
The waking is a struggle to do
Leaving comfort of dreams in night.

Moist of air blends to coating dew
Blurring the windows to look through
Shimmering in the rising light
Brief rainbows with fleeting hue.

Gloom

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-04-22 08:24 AM

So brief, so...
fantastical...
yet, it was real,
and for a brief...
moment,
within the grasp...

thank you, Professor...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-04-22 08:43 AM

Professor,
We seem to be thinking along the same lines,
enjoyed.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

3 posted 2003-04-22 08:47 AM

excellent work... Prof...

Regards,
Sudhir

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-04-22 08:58 AM

Makes me want to put on a sheer, flowing gown and run around in the pre-dawns dew...if it weren't for spiders...

loved it!

Susan

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2003-04-22 09:11 AM

Thank you, Sunshine
Your responses are always a pleasure to see

Thank you, Seymour,
Pleased you enjoyed

Thank you, Sudhir lyer,
You are very kind in your praise

Thank you, Susan
Let me brush away the webs
Heavy with morning dew
And let you run
As if a vision from a dream or two

Gloom

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-04-22 09:21 AM

Lovely write here Gloom.
I didn't want it to end..
much like a fantasy dream.
Much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-05-26 03:46 AM

yeah...wow

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