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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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0 posted 2003-04-22 12:42 PM


God’s Jewel

Godlike, his child
Close to emergence
And then back inside again
Like a piece of glass
Close to the surface
Tearing away at the skin

All of his dreams
And awakenings
There is no silence here
Muddled mind, random thoughts
Sensitivity’s fog
Yet the power to see what is real

The waves surround, but
He’s steady and strong
From all that creation holds
Subduing the anguish of his soul
With the power and glory
Of love

He’s been afraid
I understand
Too much to clarify
He already knew
Now I believe, too
No need to justify

The moon and the stars tell his story
The truth pulls away at the veils
His peace and his love
Build the trust in my heart
For with God’s child
Love never fails

[This message has been edited by Kahlil (04-22-2003 08:28 PM).]

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JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12
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California, Usa
1 posted 2003-04-22 01:30 AM


The moon and stars tell his story..as well as the sun..the galaxy..the earth..the sky..the grass.. the oceans and seas...the animals....us. His love never fails..your writing is truth and I thank you for writing it. Touched me..truly it did.
Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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2 posted 2003-04-22 01:39 AM


thank you
Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
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on the moon
3 posted 2003-04-22 05:44 AM


Kahlil! stunning as usual! vivid imagery is the name of your game, I always enjoy discovering what pictures your words will draw in my mind ~Talia
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-04-22 08:55 AM



Kahlil, a wonderful birth
of poetry...

Thank you for this

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-04-22 09:02 AM


"The moon and the stars tell his story
The truth pulls away at the veils
Peace and love
I welcome into my heart
For with God’s child
Love never fails"


Beautiful...pure poetry!!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
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6 posted 2003-04-22 12:13 PM




Oh my, this is beautiful....


Enjoyed greatly,

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
7 posted 2003-05-07 01:10 AM


Absolutely beautiful Kahlil.

"What is life
without the radiance
of love?"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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