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ShaolinsOnlyPoet
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since 2003-02-17
Posts 31
Brooklyn, New York

0 posted 2003-04-21 10:05 PM


When I'm alone
Is when the words come
Its when I remember everything
I need to say
Its when all the words
You need to hear
Come from my heart
Into my head
And even out of my mouth
Surprising me with their clarity
And eloquence
Only to escape me
As soon as I see your face

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-04-22 05:12 AM


it happens that way
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-04-22 11:45 AM


Done this myself a few times...come on get it together...you don't want to end up alone...James
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-04-22 01:47 PM


Candi, I sure understood this one.
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-04-23 02:35 AM


Candii:

This is brilliant!

amazing write . . . yes I know   xxoo

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