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Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
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0 posted 2003-04-21 07:13 PM



Teach me things
I don't know about love
Teach me to give my all
Take all of your knowledge,
instill it in me
Be it great or small

Hold me & tell me
what you desire~
everything you've
learned
show me how to
step by step
show me what makes
you burn

I long to please you
everyday~
every night & then
give you my heart,
all of my soul
for loving you is
no sin

Teach me now,
my love...


Sunkissed.

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-04-21 07:19 PM


very well done my friend...

I enjoyed...

Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 610

2 posted 2003-04-21 07:42 PM


Thank you, mon capitan...


Sunkissed.

FlyingCloud
Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151
A little place inside my head
3 posted 2003-05-02 05:58 PM


This is ultra-sweet!

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-05-02 08:06 PM



Sounds like
you could be
the one
giving lessons...


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