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Open Poetry #26

Dark thoughts

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-04-21 06:57 PM

                  Where were you when
                   the demons howled
                   the bleeding naiive virgin screamed
                   her dramatic last
                   Under the bed perhaps
                   peeking throught
                   fingers
                   as the blade cuts into her
                   and blood flows
                   or imagining the taste of blood
                   as you lick the blade?

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-04-21 07:33 PM

Brad:

cold cold cold abandonment . . .

This is so awesome
Brilliant as always
(like the creepy ones)
xxoo

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-04-22 12:03 PM

thank you

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

3 posted 2003-04-22 02:24 PM

dark abandon... good call

good work as always Brad.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-04-22 04:38 PM

Shivering in the darkness you convey powerfully here.
Love, Margherita

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2003-04-22 04:52 PM

yikes you should have warned me...
did I mention I'm a fifteen year old girl that'll be home alone tonight! Think I'll lock my doors lol
well done, you sure spooked me.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-04-23 06:32 PM

thank you

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