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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-04-21 02:41 PM


I dream
in neon green
in peaks and valleys
in steady rhythm
but more often
then not
they fade
in flatline


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-04-21 02:43 PM



Raph - that's a nightmare!  But the visual of this is striking!  Hey, don't be flatlining on us anytime soon...your snippets of thought leave us pondering and I'm not done pondering yet!  

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-04-21 03:13 PM


Raph:

you have done it again . . .

beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep

This IS awesome!! . . . seeing the EKG in my hands . . . and that flatline . . .
*shivers* *brrrr*  
(thinking hmmm . . . this - I know this . . .)

As always amazing me . . .  xxoo    

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3 posted 2003-04-21 04:39 PM


OMG, not the Flatliners theme!
Did you ever see that movie?
Having two leaky heart valves, I shuddered at this post.
Oh well, I'm much too stubborn to flatline before my time.

Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-04-21 08:59 PM


Thanks Karilea I'll be here awhile..i think?

Thanks Suepartially inspired by Joe Conelly's brilliant novel Bringing Out The Dead and just applied it to my own sick self

Never did see the whole movie, loved julia Roberts at the time, by the time I had a chance to watch it again I'd begun hating her..nevermind I've gone of track..Keep being stubborn and stick around


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5 posted 2003-04-22 05:15 AM


hmmmm....
Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-04-22 09:34 AM


...WOW!!!...

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-06-06 12:23 PM


just get up and do it again........it'll stay one day.....
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8 posted 2003-06-06 02:37 PM


this made me think of when my husband died
the_loner_23
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9 posted 2003-06-06 02:38 PM


That would be a nightmare. In the last 2 months both my Mom and Dad have had EKGs. That would be horrible if that happened to them.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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