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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-04-21 02:32 PM


Sobering to find
upon daggers pulled from back
my own fingerprints

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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-04-21 03:22 PM


Raph:

THIS IS (edited by Moderator) brilliant!

Amazing - oh you are so brilliant - your own fingerprints . . . .  

I am in awe truly . . .  just sitting and thinking to myself (thank God I know you)
hehehe  

This one is evil it is so good . . .

amazing me still - always . . . xxoo


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2 posted 2003-04-21 03:58 PM


Forgive me but the first time I misread this...thought you wrote slobbering not sobering. I'm being bad today.

What a sobering thought!

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2003-04-21 03:59 PM


Oh my!! I have done this to myself many times!!  

Well done!!

Lady In White
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4 posted 2003-04-21 04:41 PM



Sobering, yes...
sad...as well...

you must be better
to yourself, sir...
we need you around for a long,
long while...

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-04-21 04:50 PM


Wow...this is intense.
Very well done!
Eric

Cpat Hair
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6 posted 2003-04-21 04:59 PM


(chuckling)... the insight in this my friend is one we seem to have to learn over and over...
but... you have to admit..when they are our own we do at least know how to find the most vulnerable spots and at least we can make it as painful as we know it should be...

Enjoyed this... as usual.


Aenimal
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7 posted 2003-04-21 05:25 PM


Thanks Sue come on you'll give me a big head..why does that sound like that should be edited? oh well i dunno

Kacy Today? as if you aren't everyday grin

Susan we all have, thanks for the reply

Many thanks M'Lady very kind words

Thanks Ericc appreciate it

Oh yeah Cpat of course we do, human nature I guess. Thanks for reading

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-04-21 07:48 PM


because it should be . . .
MODERATORS . . . .
I smell bacon . . .
heh  

[This message has been edited by littlewing (04-21-2003 07:49 PM).]

Aenimal
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9 posted 2003-04-21 08:49 PM


Sue maybe its just fat people sweatin
littlewing
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10 posted 2003-04-21 09:35 PM


I think not . . .  
sick . . .

Jason Lyle
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11 posted 2003-04-21 10:24 PM


Damn, you are right..........those are my fingerprints.Nice.
Jason

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12 posted 2003-04-22 05:11 AM


funny, this is so true, it's not funny.
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