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Margherita
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0 posted 2003-04-21 11:38 AM








I sat in the sun
she dried all my hidden tears
and my pain is gone


[This message has been edited by Margherita (04-21-2003 11:42 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-04-21 11:44 AM



First, the rains must fall
then comes growth from sun on high
All comes right once more

~*~

Margherita - thank you for the inspire!

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-04-21 11:46 AM


Thank you dear Karilea, that's lovely! Yes ... all comes right once more!
Hugs. Margherita

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-04-21 12:53 PM


Beautiful Margherita

Silver Moon binds me
and I long for the freedom
to walk in the sun

Enchantress
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4 posted 2003-04-21 12:57 PM


How very beautiful...
Much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Patricia
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5 posted 2003-04-21 01:04 PM


I will pray that today, those thick clouds will go away.  I will surely sit in the sun, and dry my tears each and every one.  

Thank you for this beautiful verse.  You inspired me!

-Patricia

IcyFlamez89
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6 posted 2003-04-21 01:06 PM


I enjoyed this very much. it's amazing how the small haiku can evoke such strong feelings.
NewEnglandlazurlu
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7 posted 2003-04-21 02:00 PM


Oh my gosh, I loved this to pieces. There is nothing more healing to dry the tears and pain than the warmth of the sun and the breezes of the ocean.

Great poem.  Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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8 posted 2003-04-21 02:02 PM


Warmth of healing Sun

SHE who brightens up the day

Glows on face Moon

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9 posted 2003-04-21 04:52 PM


Beautiful Margherita...this says it all.
Love,
Eric

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-04-21 05:19 PM


Enjoyed...James
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11 posted 2003-04-21 06:04 PM


loverly
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12 posted 2003-04-21 06:28 PM


Simply lovely! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

MikeFessel
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13 posted 2003-04-21 07:02 PM


You must be describing youself in this poem, for this is exactly what you have done for me!!!

               Mike

If only wonderful people like you filled the world...

vandana
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14 posted 2003-04-21 07:03 PM


enjoyed
MikeFessel
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15 posted 2003-04-21 07:07 PM


Umm, I meant I was the one sitting in the sun...until you came along. I am a fool, and I don't know if I expressed myself clearly in my last reply or not

Thank you again for being a beautiful person!

           Mike

Margherita
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16 posted 2003-04-22 07:32 AM


Thank you all my dear friends for taking the time. Sunshine IS healing for heavy hearts!

Raffaele I enjoy very much your own creation. Are you a nocturne creature? Like my son? I have always to recommend sunshine to him ...

Enchantress thank you for your loving comment...

Patricia thank you, yes DO sit in the sun, SHE always inspires.

IcyFlamez89 I love your name ... evokes strong feelings too!

Marti thank you, if only we could be kissed by the sun and the ocean breeze more often!

Kacy thank you for your own beautiful creation. Indeed we owe life AND beauty to the sun!

Eric, James, Dark Angel, Nightshade and Vandana thank you for your loving comments.

Mike thank you! You explained yourself perfectly well. You will profit much from sitting in the sun for a while every day .... whenever she pierces through the clouds..... and the clouds that make your heart heavy will DISSOLVE.

Love to all.
Margherita


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17 posted 2003-04-22 11:08 AM


Margherita:

Ahhh . . .  but to feel
the sun upon my forlorn face . . .

This is lovely
xxoo

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18 posted 2003-04-22 11:11 AM


  

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