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Dance With Shadows |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“DANCE WITH SHADOWS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Melody of the blues reach into each soul, as candlelight flickers on drawn shades lighting the self of you, and I hold you close dancing into the night, bodies touching with intimacy, drawing like magnets the warmth of you to me… Eyes gaze into eyes with passions yet not unleashed, tempting is the way you respond when we are close, my fingers on hips swaying with the beat of a slow moody melody… Silhouettes dance with shadows on the wall, as a tireless guitar sings out with the want of needs, then slowly the music dies, as my being melts in the arms of you with fires burning inside me… ~~~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Bill you painted a beautiful picture. Flickering passion. Love, Margherita |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bill, Ever the romantic, this is almost delicate in it's sensual, sensitive want. Beautifully expressed. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Eyes gaze into eyes with passions yet not unleashed, tempting is the way you respond when we are close, my fingers on hips swaying with the beat of a slow moody melody… Oooh, lovely Bill. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
 BC, your poem is about as romantic as it gets! Hugs, Marti |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so beautiful Bill... Your music gets the hips swaying to the melody. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ 'Silhouettes dance with shadows on the wall, as a tireless guitar sings out with the want of needs' The imagery sings this one home~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Romantically beautiful...just as it ought to be. -Patricia |
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Darkfire k'Sheyna Junior Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 26Maryland, U.S.A. |
Very nice, I loved the beautiful imagery! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Bill So many wonderful images were seen through your most romantic words. Your words are so uplifting and so filled with love. "Love...... To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night." Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill...You've got a slow simmer going there...sounds lovely! |
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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
Bill, Your writing is everything it could expect to be. It was amazingly voiced and expressed a lot of emotion. Perfection at its best ~Sean |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...You have a way of igniting desire with this sultry poem of blues. I love the blues and I love the way this poem moves, its sensuous rhythms. ***Ivy Rose [This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (04-23-2003 11:44 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, slow dancing to the candle light... how much better can it all be. Brought some very good thoughts and memories to this romantics mind. Hey, I need to write a moonlit dance poem. I love those, too. Hugs, Ethel |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* the music in your words have all who hear it swaying gently in tender embrace...well done, Bill. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How well you write these romantic themes my friend. Enjoyed. TD |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill: you never cease to amaze me each time I read I hear in the distance that tinkling of the gypsy bell . . . I love this amazing write xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Bill, this is beautifully sensual, sweet friend, you seem to make the 12-bars multiply into 24-bars with the skipping heartbeats you bring your love! (big hugggsssssss) Splendid, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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