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Open Poetry #26

Tomorrow's Dawn

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2003-04-21 05:37 AM

Three years gone and past
A friend to the end
A bright candle, that could not last
Loss that no words can mend

The sparrow flies on the morrow's dawn
The owl flies on 'morrow's dusk
What has come, now is gone
Into the eternal daylight

Memories stay through the gloom
Through the dark hours, kindness shall bloom
The sun shall rise in the morn
To wake us from the shade

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-04-21 06:43 AM

very good write, i liked the flow!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-04-22 09:47 AM

Samson:

It lies here:

The sparrow flies on the morrow's dawn
The owl flies on 'morrow's dusk
What has come, now is gone
Into the eternal daylight

a new day . . . amazing xxoo

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2003-04-29 01:29 PM

This is a wonderful poem....
I did enjoy!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-04-30 03:45 PM

Enjoyed..James

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