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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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0 posted 2003-04-21 04:29 AM


The Place Where
Feelings Grow

She ask me to
express my feelings.
How far did
I wish to go?

I told her I wanted
to keep going until
I found the place
where feelings grow.

I wanted to know
her well enough
to get past
my fears.

And I wanted to
feel her love
softy washing
away my tears.

JamesLee
April 20
2003




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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-04-21 04:45 AM


not a hard place to find James, not for someone as feeling as you
Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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Missouri
2 posted 2003-04-21 08:42 AM


James,

This one got me!  
"I told her I wanted to keep on going until I found the place where feelings grow."
In this often superficial world, it seems people are unwilling to get to that place.   Sadly, one or the other gives up the search before the place is found.

I love your writings.  I know I have said this before but you give me so much insight.

-Patricia  

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2003-04-21 11:53 AM


Beautiful with plenty of FEELING.
I also appreciate Patricia's words, she is so right. There seems to be so much fear to show feelings.
Love, Margherita

Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-04-21 11:57 AM



James...

this is one of your best yet...

when you reach within,
and apply this delicate touch,
you strum heartstrings...

Kevin
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5 posted 2003-04-22 01:21 AM


What an answer!

very smooth friend
kev

SPIRIT
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6 posted 2003-04-22 01:24 AM


Terrific!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-04-23 02:07 AM


James - this is lovely
wishing she did indeed was away
those tears  xxoo

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