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GhostWriter_6
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0 posted 2003-04-20 08:34 AM



inspiration....your encouraging words that help see me past false limitations
is it the anticipation of our consumation or the fact that your a pretty face not within my location
its such frustration to see pictures of you and have conversations
when we cant have a decent type of male to female relation
your man has vacated the premesis and i will always remember this
cause your pink slips were sealed with a stolen kiss
excuse me miss... but i cant help but throw my self at your mercy
common courtesy thats shown by me foremost and firstly
i wish i could record these rhymes on cd.. maybe then you would feel me
maybe you would love me just as much as any
and i would be yours if you would give me hugs a plenty
affection is a direction often met at 4 way intersections
that can take a different section and teach another life long lesson
in other words dont be afraid to come and be close to me..
and find out what real love is supposed to be
not fairy tale B.s. cause we all fall under stress
common things that life brings ...till were laid to rest:
maybe beside your pillow i can stay the night?
under the cali moonlight and cuddle tight with you all night
or stay up late and watch the movies...
not to get you to do me but to spend time with you and learn you truly
can i convince you that im just a gentleman and a prince?
who loves you now ..not waitng for the past tense....
its like a sixth sense.. your sent seems to sends signals to my body
when that somebody is pressed against my body
???are you that somebody???
is this another imagination created figure
destined to settle in a mixture like snow globe glitter
will the roses forver bloom or are they destined to wilter
i can get technical if thats the type of man that keeps you pleased
and i can get down on one knee and beg you to forever be with me
wedding rings and things sex scenes..or you in some tight jeans
all things that my mind creates in vivid dreams
beach sand and neverland go hand in hand cause the land and sand you see i can never set foot upon
cause my coast is 3 hours different from ya rising sun
pictures can only keep me from going insaine without you..
if a picture is worth a thousand words.. then i feel like i almost know all about you

© Copyright 2003 Antonio Marquis Bankhead - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2003-04-20 08:51 AM


Wow!!  There are so many intense thoughts here and I really enjoyed reading through them one and all!!  Great stuff!!!  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

GhostWriter_6
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2 posted 2003-04-20 09:41 AM


thanx for the reply.. im glad someone read it.. its been a while since i have psted here.. just thought i would come back to share some of my new work with ya.....
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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3 posted 2003-04-20 12:39 PM


nice to see good writeing
Justbleu
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4 posted 2003-04-21 02:48 AM


I enjoyed your style....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2003-04-21 11:27 PM


yes to this! a beautiful heart felt
write, and I truly love your style
of writing. your rhyming patterns
are awesome! you got my vote! take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert
6 posted 2003-04-22 01:07 AM


Very well done. Enjoyed and voted.
GhostWriter_6
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7 posted 2003-05-15 11:51 AM


thanx for the feedback.. glad to see ya liked it.. by the way.. what ya voting on????/
FlyingCloud
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since 2003-04-28
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A little place inside my head
8 posted 2003-05-16 09:02 PM


Intense! I like the way this was done, but its too long.

Always remember to forget
The friends that proved untrue.
But never forget to remember
Those who have stuck by you.
-Anon

SparkleeLipGloss
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since 2003-05-18
Posts 19
Arizona, USA
9 posted 2003-05-18 01:30 AM


Wow.. absolutly amazing! Its written the way my boyfriend writes his poetry.. I haven't heard any of them in a long time.. lol.. I'll need to bug him to let me read them!
Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2003-05-18 01:36 AM




(sigh) Oh Antonio, no distance can halt or prevent love from sailing, like Shakira sings "Lucky we were born far away so we can both make fun of distance!" The way I see it, love should be an adventure and if you just select the first you see, what fun is that! (big hugggsssssss) Here's hoping very soon time draws you to your love, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Antonio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

passing shadows
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11 posted 2003-05-18 05:34 AM


wow! what an ending line!
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