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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2003-04-19 11:04 PM


Plez fir give duh
ig no rince
I shell nod writ
uh nuttin since
I do nod see jud whad yusee
whadju tink iz lov oily
Duh grass id green duh sky
id blue
Sum how id seem somo tuyu

I ole wannuh loiv duh goil
Id be foju fohoom I toil
So how den thad id hadube
I don buhlong in poetree

Nawtuh be yu chawmin prince
Plez fogive duh ig no rince



[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (04-20-2003 09:53 PM).]

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-04-19 11:12 PM


how well thought and written!!
passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-04-20 03:03 AM


you so silly *giggle*
Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-04-20 08:15 AM



ROTFLMBO...WALT!  Come back and leave some more...it took me five minutes to dissemble this...but I LOVE the accent!

Dark Angel
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4 posted 2003-04-20 08:15 AM


oh walty...giggling here.

good to read you again m'friend lol
thanks for the smiles

Maree

Sunnyone
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5 posted 2003-04-20 09:21 AM


What fun this is!!!  I think you just gave us a new format for writing!!!!  You siwwy wabbit......

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

paladin
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6 posted 2003-04-20 10:25 AM


Yew have grate grammer.I are impressed.

paladin

....a knight without armor

Nan
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7 posted 2003-04-20 11:29 AM


Hmmmm.... Hmmmm.... Hmmmmm.....
...Well... Happy Easter, you silly Rabbit...

elisaseyes
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8 posted 2003-04-20 09:55 PM


This is way too cute. Thank you for this, and yes, I forgive your "igno ince" .
cruz
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9 posted 2003-04-21 02:25 AM


i like the fairy tale, and did you mean for it to have a double meaning? i like...
wayoutwalt
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10 posted 2003-04-21 07:27 PM


big big BIG smiles to ya'll all!!!!!!!
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