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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-04-19 07:06 PM


Hello

Can't allow this
to go on forever.
It's time for me
to take my chance.
To share a dance.
To get to know
her better.
How do I know.
I knew the second
we said our first
hello.

JamesLee
April 19
2003

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Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
1 posted 2003-04-19 07:46 PM


Share that dance, James.  You are right, you can't let this go on forever.  Take the chance.  You knew that you had to from your first hello.

-Patricia

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-04-20 03:36 AM


I wish I were so sure...
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-04-21 04:42 PM


Thank you Patrica and passing shadows...mostly this is about the moment when you first notice someone...and your mind instantly starts saying "do something".
And I know from experience if I don't act I will be sorry later...you have to take a chance...even if you look like a fool...James

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