navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #26 » Take it all Away.
Open Poetry #26
Post A Reply Post New Topic Take it all Away. Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
karebear07
Member
since 2003-04-15
Posts 64
Texas

0 posted 2003-04-19 05:16 PM


I walk in the way of all I have trying to lose it all before it all leaves me.
These lights wnet out a longtime ago when I was more confused.
It takes me away, far from away it takes me.
The pleasing feeling of flying over all the pain like I never had any.
Running through the crowd knocking down whoever is in my way.
I'm just trying to find something that will take it all away.
Away far away, that is all I can say.
Away from me away from all the pain.

            -Kara <><

© Copyright 2003 Kara - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-04-19 05:22 PM


I enjoyed reading your write!
          >>QjQ<<
looking forward to reading  more!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-04-20 02:41 AM


Pain is not fun to live with...reminds me of the time I went through a divorce and I had to lay on the couch all night watching TV, TBN in fact, until exhausted I would finally fall asleep always taking the thought to sleep with me that I would awaken to the pain again in the morning...James
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-04-20 02:49 AM


very sad write...sending hugs to you
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-05-29 03:09 AM


This is very sad. I'm sorry that you felt
this way. I hope things are better now.
Hugs,  
Ethel

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #26 » Take it all Away.

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary