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Open Poetry #26

tapestry of love

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

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0 posted 2003-04-19 02:08 PM

TAPESTRY OF LOVE

We have painted a portrait of love,
which hangs on the wall above.
Many pictures, of happy days gone,
have filled the family album.
I'm sure your diary is written full, with
secret thoughts and memories.
For we have woven our life into a
tapestry, with threads of love
and many memories of past.
We've not woven out the faults we
shared and our threads of belief in
each other has made our tapestry
of life interlaced ever so tight.

[This message has been edited by QjQ (04-19-2003 02:09 PM).]

passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-04-19 02:14 PM

very nice

MikeFessel
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since 2003-04-19

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2 posted 2003-04-19 02:15 PM

A picture of perfect love! This is a wonderful poem, and if this is based on your own life, I am so happy for you!

Michael Fessel

P.S.- I can see this poem in my mind embossed upon a plate of gold over a crackling, murmering fireplace in a happy home.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-04-20 02:40 PM

"I'm sure your diary is written full, with
secret thoughts and memories."

Now, these are lines
that touch a soul...

who doesn't have one secret,
written somewhere...
if even on one's heart...

Lovely!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-04-20 03:49 PM

Nice writing...James

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

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5 posted 2003-04-21 01:33 PM

This is sooo very nice....I can see the tapestry woven together ever so nicely showing all it's splendid color and design!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29

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California Desert

6 posted 2003-04-22 01:11 AM

Lovely writing - very nice. Love the title.

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