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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-04-19 12:04 PM


Call Me

Why break my heart
Kellie Kim.
Open your arms
and let me in.
I only want to
get close to you.
On a long silky
night I could
satisfy you.

JamesLee
April 19
2003

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Magnus
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1 posted 2003-04-19 12:17 PM


This one pretty well speaks straight from
the hip...or is it the pen...??  

regards2you
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2 posted 2003-04-19 12:28 PM




James,

Short and to the point! But, with the heart involved, intent is certainly more than the one kind of satisfying I read into this. Sweet romantic love.


Hugs, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-04-19 12:39 PM


Very sweet James..I'm sure she will love this one!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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4 posted 2003-04-19 12:50 PM


Well, this one tells it like it is which is a pretty good thing.  Beats the heck out of beating around the bush or playing games! LOL

-Patricia

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-04-19 02:23 PM


what are we gonna do with ya?
QjQ
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6 posted 2003-04-19 05:41 PM


I enjoyed reading your write!
          >>QjQ<<
looking forward to reading  more!

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-04-19 06:38 PM


Thank you Magnus, regards, Enchantress, Patricia, passing shadows and QJQ for the nice responses...My thoughts and conversations allways way ahead of my actions...yeah I like her...does she like me...I don't know...I gave her my number...I don't have hers...sometimes just trying provides a degree of satisfaction...James
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