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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-04-18 10:06 PM


I missed the boat, and placed a bottle afloat
with a message in it for you, the winds and
currents carried it far and wide in hopes of
finding you, I know your lonely, walking the
shores with out me, by your side, as we used
to do at the midnight tide, I remember the moon
beams shining in your eyes as they sparkled
like stars above, I gaze at a star each night
and a wish that you will find the bottle with my
message to you,

[This message has been edited by QjQ (04-18-2003 10:17 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-04-18 10:12 PM


This has such a wonderful ebb and flow.
Welcome to Passions. I am sure I'll be seeking more from your pen.

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2003-04-18 10:43 PM


maybe you haven't missed the boat after all
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3 posted 2003-04-19 09:49 AM


QjQ~
Isn't this lovely ?  YES, it is !

Welcome to our ever-growing circle of poets and friends~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-04-19 02:12 PM


I walk the shore and look for messages in bottles...none yet, but some day.

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (04-19-2003 02:13 PM).]

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-04-19 06:45 PM


I found a Suntory Whiskey bottle floating on the North Shore...probably from a Japanese fishing boat...no message...still a few shots of something in the bottle...James
Justbleu
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6 posted 2003-04-21 01:27 PM


Oh man....This is sooo good!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


SPIRIT
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7 posted 2003-04-21 02:40 PM


Very nice indeed.
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