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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2003-04-18 09:21 PM

On the heated sands of the Negev desert,
I stood silently close to you,
head lifted tentatively to receive
the touch of your hand offered
in a sensual gentleness
I’d never known before,
and sadly, have not experienced since.

Pushing aside a sheerest face veil
intended to protect my fairness from
scorching slaps of the fiery desert sun,
you exposed much more than my pale visage.
Your thoughtful gaze from soft brown eyes
made me feel the inner warmth of a mind and soul
who saw past my fragile defensive outer layers
as if they were transparencies,
revealing a soul that yearned for the fires
of pure passionate love.

My heart beat erratically with Eros thoughts,
nearly bursting from its holding place
in wanton anticipation.
But we were not destined to be,
you and me,
although I knew in my heart
you wanted me
as I wanted you.

And the heat of that moment
remains within the core of me,
even as I feel the coldness
of distance and time
encircling my body.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (04-18-2003 09:42 PM).]

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

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1 posted 2003-04-18 10:43 PM

I enjoyed reading your write!
>>QjQ<<
forward to reading more!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-04-18 11:18 PM

Unrequited passion can often leave an indelible mark on one's mind--and on one's heart. Your descriptive words were so romantic and full of wistful, yet bittersweet, longing.

Love & Light,
Linda

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-04-19 04:07 AM

God Kacy - this is brilliant! OUCH

But we were not destined to be,
you and me,
although I knew in my heart
you wanted me
as I wanted you.

xxoo

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-04-19 10:04 AM

Thank you, friends for taking a moment to read and reply. Yes, it's amazing how the memory of one touch can stay with you forever.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-04-19 06:48 PM

Silky sensual...you have captured some soft moments...james

Midnitesun

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Gaia

6 posted 2003-04-19 06:53 PM

James, thanks.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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7 posted 2003-04-19 07:19 PM

enjoyed

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

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8 posted 2003-04-19 08:48 PM

I think you just redefined moment poetry Kacy.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2003-04-20 09:17 AM

Dear Kacy this is very beautiful. An enchanting moment that stretches into eternity. Truly yours forever. Maybe it is just enough in its perfection?
Much enjoyed.
Love, Margherita

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2003-04-20 09:32 AM

Thanks Vandana.
Duncan, ya think so? Thanks for this moment.
Margherita, I appreciated that reply.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-04-20 10:22 AM

Kacy...I so enjoyed this...
thank you!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

12 posted 2003-04-20 10:42 AM

Then I'm glad to have shared this memory moment with you, Karilea Sunshine.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

13 posted 2003-04-20 12:44 PM

Midnitesun - it seems that there is always one that stays in the mind that's special...

BC

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