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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2003-04-18 03:00 PM




Missing

I
Need to
Feel your hands
Move over me
With the grace only you can hold, possess
I’ll never let you slip from memory
Even as your
Ghost touches
Fade and
Leave.

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (04-18-2003 03:01 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-04-18 03:22 PM


Enjoyed...James
Bill Charles
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2 posted 2003-04-18 04:11 PM


rosepetals25 - yes, hands of feathers, a heartfelt write...

BC

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3 posted 2003-04-18 06:34 PM


I
Need to
Feel your hands
Move over me
ah yes... very nicely said.

Sven
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4 posted 2003-04-18 11:55 PM


what remains. . .

great work rp. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

rosepetals25
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5 posted 2003-04-22 12:39 PM


Thank you all for stopping in I apologize it took so long to give that thank you.. my puter has been down   I know the horror!!! LOL  

Now I'm getting off track *chuckles*  Thanks

Tara

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6 posted 2003-06-10 07:13 AM


nice, intimate, i enjoyed... rose.


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7 posted 2003-06-10 07:36 AM


Great job. I enjoyed this immensely.

Day after day I'm more confused,
So I look for the light through the pouring rain...

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8 posted 2003-06-10 09:19 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is a very eerie expression of holding the pieces of what is lost, dearest friend, you always seem to make the heartstrings vibate with your honesty! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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9 posted 2003-06-11 03:32 AM


cool!
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10 posted 2003-06-11 04:01 PM


Still enjoying...James
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11 posted 2003-06-11 04:12 PM


very nice write/read,,,

QjQ

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