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Grey (Musing on the Wedding)
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Grey (Musing on the Wedding) |
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BrokenBird New Member
since 2003-04-05
Posts 7United States |
Solitary existence is no existence at all, plaguing the anomalies of a woman's mind. I was made to love but one, and love fiercely clinging steadfastly to a desire I was unaware of. Modern Bride is open in my lap, the pages dog-eared on colors of seafoam, azure, champagne; simplicity lost even in a color scheme, complexity a burden that leaves no one untouched. How is it then, when I ask about your spectrum I see only grey? Broken Bird |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent writing! I'll be looking between the lines on this - there is wonderful depth and many questions... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, I don't have that desire...been there, done it once, and may never do it again. Of course, I was taught never to say never. Good write, got me thinking. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I agree with Sunshine...there seems to be some hidden things between the lines here. This is a very well-written poem that makes the reader think. That's a good thing.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I sensed frustration and sadness in your words. Wonderfully descriptive writing! Warm hugs, EA |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Brokenbird...BRAVO!!!! Excellent poem!! There is such intense imagery in this piece. You draw the reader into your word picture and make them experience your feelings. ***Ivy Rose |
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