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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
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on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-17 10:35 PM


Have you ever seen an angel?
One had fallen into my arms somehow
but the complications
of embracing a piece of heaven follow...

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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2003-04-17 10:51 PM


Black Swan - I've not seen an angel, but this poem is excellent...

BC

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2003-04-20 04:00 PM


I've seen some that I thought were angels...I've held some that I thought were angels...I've kissed some that I thought were angels...but the complications followed...James
QjQ
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3 posted 2003-04-20 05:27 PM


Angels drift and sometimes linger, sometimes fly away to wait for us another day
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-04-21 02:44 AM


excellent!
Sunnyone
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5 posted 2003-04-21 07:35 AM


My friend, reading this was like a piece of heaven.....will there be a sequel, as it seems to lend itself to more, or maybe that's because I love it, and just want more!!!  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-05-25 04:48 AM


too good to be back in the back
Deep_Inside
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i can't stop hiding
7 posted 2003-05-28 12:38 PM


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2003-05-28 01:45 PM



Short, tight, intense...

very good!

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