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Tim
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0 posted 2003-04-17 08:51 PM


I was reflecting with my wife,
Of long agoes, a once was life,
High school years when first we met,
Boomers both, not adults yet.

The Beatles rocked and how we rolled,
In the sixties, 'fore we got old,
Long haired hippies; psychedelic,
Not yet thirty, not yet a relic.

I said, "you know, we still are cool,"
She replied, "Tim you're a fool,
A flower child? You best forget it,
My husband dear, you're a blooming idiot."

[This message has been edited by Tim (04-17-2003 08:53 PM).]

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Kahlil
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1 posted 2003-04-17 09:00 PM


Hold on now!  I say we are still cool...I say we're cooler than EVER!!!!  
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2 posted 2003-04-17 09:09 PM


Hey Tim, the older I get, the cooler
I feel... LOL  (maybe I'm going back
into my childhood?)  

I liked this delightful poem...

Hugs,
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-04-17 09:15 PM


We "boomers" are the coolest!! enjoyed this cute write Tim. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

regards2you
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4 posted 2003-04-17 09:24 PM




Quite witty.  Grins here.


Pat

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Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-04-17 09:45 PM



Tell her...if she says so...

here you go...

Happy Easter, Tim!

Martie
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6 posted 2003-04-17 10:57 PM


Tim...I think you're very cool!!  
jaysh
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7 posted 2003-04-17 11:23 PM


you can still be cool...although hippies arent quite the rage anymore, you can still be cool in my book, good write, keep up the good work!
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