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Open Poetry #26

RAIN HIDES MY TEARS

MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2003-04-17 04:30 AM

I’m freefalling ,
Into the abyss,

I wish I had been more neutral,

Just like the Swiss.

Why did I kill all the good inside me?

Tortured words from a troubled mind,

I guess that’s the story off mankind.

Despairs cold grip is tugging at me,

I’ve been cursed just like the fig tree.

At least the rain hides my tears.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-04-17 01:11 PM

I do know this feeling well

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2003-04-28 08:44 PM

I understand.....
HUGS,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

3 posted 2003-04-28 09:10 PM

So sad. Yes, rain sometimes hides the tears.

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-04-29 09:23 PM

thoughts well written

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Lost_Soul
Junior Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 37
California, United States

5 posted 2003-05-03 05:32 PM

very good. its true that rain can hide tears. Thats why I like rain so much.

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-05-03 09:58 PM

It's been raining here, today....now there's a use for it. A well-written lesson, that closely resembles a well-written poem as well.

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