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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
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Ireland

0 posted 2003-04-17 04:32 AM


DESIRE"

I ASKED MY SOUL A QUESTION

I DIDN`T WANT NO LIES

ARE THE FIRES WITHIN ME

EVER TO ARISE?



I GAZED UPON A GAUNT FIGURE

A TIRED AND TWISTED MAN

REALISING MY REFLECTION

THAT MOMENT MY LIFE BEGAN



FOR TOO LONG I`VE BEEN TOO CAUTIOUS

FOR TOO LONG I`VE BEEN TOO LONELY

FOR TOO LONG I`VE BEEN TOO SAD

NO MORE `IF ONLY`



THE FLAMES OF DESIRE

ALTHOUGH COVERED IN BARBWIRE

WILL LIFT ME FROM THIS QUAGMIRE

FROM NOW I WILL INSPIRE



NOW I EXCITEDLY DREAM

THAT I WILL REIGN SUPREME

LIKE THE CAT THAT GOT THE CREAM

FOR ITS TRUE I`VE BEEN REDEEMED.

[This message has been edited by MERCURY (04-18-2003 03:47 AM).]

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life
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since 2003-04-14
Posts 36
India
1 posted 2003-04-17 08:10 AM



woooooooww
nice one

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2003-04-17 01:08 PM


no box to vote...edit and check the box that puts this in as a book submission...I will vote

edit by clicking the "Paper and pencil" icon at the top of your post

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (04-17-2003 01:09 PM).]

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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3 posted 2003-04-18 07:57 PM


I enjoyed reading your write!
          >>QjQ<<
forward to reading  more!

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-04-18 08:21 PM


This ia a really good poem...a positive thinker. A very good book submission, too.  
Hugs,
Ethel

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-04-18 08:36 PM


A beautiful song of redemption! Hallelujah!

Love & Light,
Earth Angel

Startime55
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6 posted 2003-04-18 08:38 PM


WOW!!! Beautifully said....very powerful
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