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karebear07
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since 2003-04-15
Posts 64
Texas

0 posted 2003-04-17 06:27 PM


I'm a jumble of things that I don't want.
I know I can't leave them because It's my job to solve them.
It's a mess of not knowing what to do.
I want to cry but not for myself for someone else.
I want to scream from all the pain inside me.
Because life is confusing for me sometimes.
A prayer for me a prayer for you it will do alot of good.
I want some time then I will decide if its right.
I just have to get through my bad news so I can worry for something not important.
I wish it was like that in life but it's not.
I know I'm not alone but it feels like it when no one talks to me because I see a little differently.
          - Kara <><

© Copyright 2003 Kara - All Rights Reserved
jaysh
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 133
IL, USA
1 posted 2003-04-18 12:46 PM


good poem, easy to relate too, I understand you, you expressed yourself very well here, good job keep it up, and write more because Im looking forward to reading it!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-04-18 01:46 AM


I can relate...you are not alone in these feelings.
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-04-19 04:01 AM


Kara:

you punched through right here:

I know I'm not alone but it feels like it when no one talks to me because I see a little differently.

Keep seeing . . .  this is a good thing
xxoo

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