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Sojourn |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Feet planted pure in their nakedness alone Stand with me here upon this world of stone Atlantic crashing madly rehashing speaking to me in waves below OH! so close to the edge . . . Float with me within this realm weightlessly leaving thrice weaving send me home to the place of my birth Wild wind whispering soul singing it is time to decide to fly . . . Sky above me sea below Four corners pulling me to go Echoes in sleep sweet slumber deep Turn and awake last chance to glance at this place I leap [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-17-2003 02:27 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, you might as well start curtseying right now! ---because you are surely going to get some great responses for this outstanding piece of fine poetry! Warm springtime hugs, Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You evoked immense forces here .... ready to leap, the soul's longing is exquisitely expressed. I miss your picture, but I carry your smile in my heart ... Wonderful write! Love, Margherita  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Feet planted pure in their nakedness alone Stand with me here upon this world of stone I am on the edge of your writing...watching you ~smiling M |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
 I am jumping in jubilation. Great poem |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I pray that you will soon be able to fly as free as a bird and as happy and carefree as an Angel.  Hugs, Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Linda - you are much too gracious thank you Margherita - always leaving me with a smile - you are so sweet - such a pure soul - thank you Maureen - goodness I feel like that too when I watch you paint your life on these pages . . . thank you Thomas - excellent! Keep jumping! Thank you Ethel: always a kind word from your heart -I will be soon - I feeeeel it - thank you my friend - means a lot to me Thanks guys xxoo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
TY [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-17-2003 07:03 PM).] |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
awesome write I'm next to you ready to take that flight |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Everything I read of yours is totally amazing!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Very nice, ready to leap..... I love it.what did you do with the pretty pic Sue? Jason |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dream - thank you . . . Nancy - much to kind to me you are - thank you Jason - thank you . . . The pic . . . its downloading again - how nice of you - pretty pic TY Thanks guys xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You know I love this fly already |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Bare feet on plummets edge Hair whipped by ocean spray Sparkled eyes aswirl in doubt Spirit weighs the corporal plunge A beauty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a definite keeper! a fine piece of work here Sue, I really enjoyed reading through. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh to be this young again and feel my spirit fly free as you have shown yours will. Enjoy the journey. (I loved Wranx response)  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph - yes, of course I do . . . Ed - corporal plunge - I love that . . . Dixie - too kind - much too kind . . . Mysteria - one day . . . Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-19-2003 03:28 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you James xxoo |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Still jumping but Man oh man getting tired can i just jump when I come back and read this again? |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Such power and emotion in this piece. Loved the lyical flow of it. I can just feel my soul sway and drift among the swirling sea and the lifting sky. in short, just plain WONDERFUL |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thomas - hahahahaha yes you can stop jumping lmao Icy - wow - thank you - guess I brought you there . . . Thanks guys xxoo |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Really like this! what more can I say? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Songbird - nice to see you reading me xxoo |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
liked this piece very much, with feet on the ground you have sailed the seas flying thru your thought's and " I leap " bump bump bump A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Bernie - havent been in here in so long - have missed so much . . . so are you jumping or enjoying my jump? lol |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh...now how could I miss this one? (kiss on cheek) I was busy with school for a while the time this was posted so must have failed to find this! This is beautiful, sweet friend, your words always take us on magical journies, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
last chance to glance at this place I leap will i need a parachute or pure faith? |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very terrific write,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah - thanks - I have been away for a bit myself . . . Michele - ummm - if it were me you know I would have a parachute JUST IN CASE LOL Q - thank you thanks guys xxoo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Clearly crafted imagery. Well done. No one needs a parachute, just let go of the rope and be free. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Litlewing...This is a pure piece. So excellently expressed and written with depth and flow. ***Ivy Rose |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ice - how inspiring - thank you = and no no one should need the need for a parachute yw ivy - wow - thank you so much thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-08-2003 02:28 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow, this came back up here again! Yes! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dix - you sneak . . . TY |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks for the bump Bernie *smile* |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
very invigorating. Love this :-) "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Wow, but this just doesn't seem right. Someone like you shouldn't be feeling this.  You are too young to be going through these things. As soon as I started reading this seems my mind just flew through it. Wow, again. Love, Terri~  |
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