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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2003-04-17 06:01 AM

I listen to the nora jones
imagining your face enthralled
thinking that I sing like that?
and loving you for just the thought.

I see you in an apron tied
wishing I had crafted bow--
the pride of me upon your neck
the scent of us upon your breath
and whiskers that remain unshaved
greet me with the joy of that
the thought of you in mind...

Nudge your butt
from the bucket
and playful flicks
from fingertip
waterpark
from just a lark
teasing you by pout
of lips--
I want to greet you at the door
of a place we both call home
and just the very thought of that
makes me be a good girl now...

Watching you in sweaty jeans
serious intensity
telling me how it should be
where the sun will swell the crop
as you hammer in the stakes
of tomatoes growing tall--
I love you
watch you
plant our faith
I hear the church bells
thinking harp
as the sun plays on your skin
I love to watch you stretch--
I'm caught
a bit of charcoal washed
in rough
with creases prominent
by knead...

smiling wrinkles
of my thoughts
and light
is just
a
touch of us
dabbing at the grays on rust--
picking up
the blues of hues
where life remains untouched.

Let me bring you some iced tea.
Let me wrinkle, bruise the leaves
of the mint that we will plant
in a distant corner--thought--
a place where mint can still be stealth--
and wishes are a complement
to tones of white on black made gray--

I plant the thought
of us and pray
We grow these smiles
upon my face...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-04-17 06:19 AM

. . . a slice of Heaven indeed . . .

*smiles*

this is beautiful Karen xxoo

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2003-04-17 06:27 AM

i think this sums it all up...

"I'm caught"

what sweet words
sweet poem
brings a smile and a tear...h

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-04-17 06:28 AM

Looking at all the snapshots...
wishing this scrapbook
were mine?

Maybe...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2003-04-17 08:22 AM

the pride of me upon your neck
the scent of us upon your breath
~~
as the sun plays on your skin
I love to watch you stretch--I'm caught
=====================

BIG OLE FRIGGEN MOTH *SIGH*

*SIGH*

(YKTIKTYKIK)*sigh* Oh do I KNOW
(see me mothysig)

You're the best I've ever felt ...
it's so wrong not to be with you.
It's getting harder to stay away,
it stops my heart just to be with you.

SH

life
Junior Member

since 2003-04-14

Posts 36
India

5 posted 2003-04-17 08:27 AM

NICE !!!!~~~~

luvs
life

friendship is unnecessary...like philosophy...like art
it has no survival value...rather it is one of those things that gives value to survival...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-04-17 09:05 AM

Oh my..such a sweet soft sigh.
This is beautiful Karen..
"I'm caught"........yes!
IWIHWT! ~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2003-04-17 09:23 AM

I love you
watch you
plant our faith
I hear the church bells
thinking harp
as the sun plays on your skin
I love to watch you stretch--
I'm caught

Deeply enjoyable! I love the rhythm accompanying your dreamy thoughts.
Love, Margherita

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2003-04-17 11:11 AM

I plant the thought
of us and pray
We grow these smiles
upon my face...

nice thoughts Karen..

hugs and I love Nora Jones
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-17-2003 11:42 AM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-04-17 11:24 AM

as the sun plays on your skin
I love to watch you stretch--
I'm caught
.
.
OHHH, how I know this, Karen. My Love pleasures in getting me out in public places where I have to be a "good girl" and then doing one of his big exaggerated stretches that I love so much. (Well, I'd better hush now......the smiles are getting pretty big on my face about now!!)

Hugs and thanks, Karen!!
Ethel

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

10 posted 2003-04-17 11:28 AM

Your writes are so full of images
I do not need x-ray vision to see through your poems for all we need is spelled out and clear just in a different light then one might expect.

Thomas

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2003-04-17 12:27 PM

serenity....This feels joy born!

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

12 posted 2003-04-17 12:39 PM

luckiest man alive

strrreeeeeeeeettchhhh

sigh a wow....

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

13 posted 2003-04-17 01:52 PM

So many voices raising;
All of them are praising.
Me too!!
Just an elegant expression of love and sensuality. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2003-04-17 03:12 PM

serenity
You knit a fine muffler for your neck to keep warm, enjoyed.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

15 posted 2003-04-17 06:47 PM

'and loving you for just the thought'

Ya had me at the first verse...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

16 posted 2003-04-17 10:11 PM

you lucky b*stard..grin good on you..and Norah..aaaaaaaah Norah, Ravi done good and K well you always done good.
Hugs

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

17 posted 2003-04-17 10:25 PM

This is the way it is supposed to be - a little Norah, Alicia Keys, Dianna Krall, and a lot of tender loving going on. Ummmm, this was yummy.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

18 posted 2003-04-20 04:03 PM

"I plant the thought of us and pray."
Very nice...James

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

19 posted 2003-04-20 05:24 PM

wow this write says it all, very warm and loveing

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

20 posted 2003-04-20 05:58 PM

enjoyed

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

21 posted 2003-04-20 06:42 PM

serenity blaze - your words, your words...

BC

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

22 posted 2003-04-20 09:15 PM

a simple and quiet thank you

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

23 posted 2003-04-20 09:52 PM

Beatiful! hope my wife feels just like this!
Jason

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

24 posted 2003-04-20 09:58 PM

really sweet. side note--- Norah Jones went to my university (we got a top notch music college)--- and graduated about a year before I got there

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