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Open Poetry #26

Sun and Moon

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2003-04-17 04:16 AM

moon's translucent skin
eve tides invisible veil
a new sun rises
light years away
fading blue flames and embers
a sunrise escapes

long, last sigh of night
a dream reclines in repose
sun slips into place
a parchment moon
writes through smoke-filled clouds
and stained glass windows

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-04-17 04:47 AM

a parchment moon
writes through smoke-filled clouds
and stained glass windows

Now THAT--is poetry.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-04-17 05:24 AM

Enjoyed Cheryl...James

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

3 posted 2003-04-17 05:26 PM

a big thanks ! I appreciate the comments and support.

Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-04-30 02:01 PM

I enjoyed!!!!
Very nice!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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