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Submarine Ride
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Submarine Ride |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I am aboard a submarine Beneath the ocean I do not know how I came to be there Yet I am there Looking out port holes Wondering how long this journey will be Suddenly the under-water vessel Is flung by an unseen power Upon the edge of a cliff Overlooking the sea I look out the peepholes Amazed at how suddenly I have arrived on dry land Feeling the nature of the precarious position Upon which this vessel sits I ponder thoughts of my safety Awakening to find It all a dream or was it? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Was this a yellow submarine? James |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I was wondering that myself, but unfortunatly it was not dreamed in color. LOL |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I am about to head to bed so mine I think shall be a blue submarine - see you in my dreams!  Enjoyed this! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Songbird: (love the name - is that from Fleetwood Mac?) This awesome . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . POE xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-19-2003 04:07 AM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Songbird: I think you might have been protecting yourself from strong emotions you've been feeling because of a certain situation in your life. You knew you'd find your way out, but you didn't know how, and you didn't know how long it might take. A force within you (maybe your own) lifted you up and helped you out. Your new-found personal growth and strength felt precarious because it was new, but somehow you knew you were ok. |
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