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brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2003-04-16 11:40 PM

infinity standing on the ground
       barefoot
and raining
leaves
       to crown my head

     the weight
finds my knees leaving two impressions
    in the earth

yes
     Infinity

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-04-16 11:51 PM

I read you and the word is...amazing.

I use so many words and you just type the picture and allow the reader to make the adjustments--

genius and perfection.

and yes...8...infinity...

(yer so clever too)

Iamyou....skating 8's...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-04-17 12:13 PM

Brilliant Bri..agreed K, seemingly effortless in how he says so much in so little

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-04-17 06:33 AM

OK, so you post at hours I'm not here...then everyone else says what I would say...so all I can do is

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-04-17 06:37 AM

Bri:

this is amazing . . .
I saw that - your knees - as I pictured infinity . . .

How you do this I have no idea
but am glad I am here to see it
xxoo

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

5 posted 2003-04-17 10:57 PM

you people are too kind to me

thank you all

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2003-04-19 09:33 AM

Bearing the weight of infinity leaves
holds you fast

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-04-20 03:47 AM

very creative

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

8 posted 2003-04-20 08:05 AM

this is serene yuh i like how it goes and flows

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

9 posted 2003-05-03 10:12 PM

We need more of this, Brian..... and this one needs to be seen by more people. I'm popping it to the top!

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-05-03 10:27 PM

Brian, I'm also amazed at how you can put
so much meaning into so few words.

Yes, I also could see the impressions of
your knees in the earth.

Very interesting, the way you do this.

Hugs,
Ethel

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

11 posted 2003-05-04 12:43 PM

thank you very much
I appreciate you all

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

12 posted 2003-05-04 05:18 AM

What a very clever and poetic mind you have...

I'm looking forward to more!

Richy

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