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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-04-16 11:18 PM





Writing poetry
Putting ones heart thoughts to words
With love sprinkled in

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Please add on some verse as your reply....senryu, haiku, tanka, cinquain, rictameter...or any other that you know and I don't. Like the others we've done, the next verse needs to be related in some way to the one right above it. These really are fun to do. Thanks!!

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-04-16 11:29 PM


~*~

The sharing of self
Thru' expressive poety,
Joins one another.

~*~

IcyFlamez89
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2 posted 2003-04-16 11:33 PM


Poetry links us,
Our hearts and souls fused as one,
We are the Poet.

Suetang
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3 posted 2003-04-16 11:47 PM


A poet weaves his words
through each verse to create
a most beautiful tapestry
for us all to admire


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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-04-17 12:04 PM


Poetry a sword
thrust into experience
soul bleeds, inks the quill

Local Parasite
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5 posted 2003-04-17 12:08 PM


By pen and eyelid
Experience made naked
A rape of nature

rosepetals25
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6 posted 2003-04-17 09:30 AM


revealing ourselves
with these words that reflect our
inner thoughts, feelings


Tara

"in my field of paper flowers
and candy clouds of lullaby
i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
- Imaginary by Evanes

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2003-04-17 09:33 AM



Exposed, we unfold
Harvesting golden, pure thought
Swift runs river's bless

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just out of reach
8 posted 2003-04-17 10:02 AM





my dreams become yours
shared like secrets with a friend
my writings of fantasy ~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
9 posted 2003-04-17 10:38 AM


Mind's eye stores the truth.
Hidden words between the lines
Reveal if only's.

Enchantress
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10 posted 2003-04-17 11:01 AM




Something in common,
A desire to write and share..
Yes, we are Poets.

kayjay
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11 posted 2003-04-17 11:20 AM


Sharing is caring,
The gift of our humanity.
May we ne'er lose it.

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

garysgirl
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12 posted 2003-04-17 11:37 AM


When we care and share
With poetry from our hearts
We become great friends

suthern
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13 posted 2003-04-17 11:59 AM


From another’s pen
Come words that so touch our heart
They might have been ours.

rcl 4eva
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14 posted 2003-04-17 04:50 PM


Wrap them in our arms
Our souls interwined in love,
Forever in bliss

abbe
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15 posted 2003-04-17 04:57 PM


poetically
i meander my words here
poet no, dreamer, yes!

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NewEnglandlazurlu
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16 posted 2003-04-17 05:44 PM


Poets use their words
To bare what is in their hearts
With reflective thought

Hugs, Marti

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17 posted 2003-04-17 06:01 PM


Mining sapphires
Those inside a poets soul
Glimmering through time



Love,
Noah Eaton


And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery.

***Shakira***

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littlewing
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18 posted 2003-04-17 06:10 PM


Bestial and naked
I stand before you
spilling soul  

CSKpoet
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19 posted 2003-04-18 01:08 AM



writimg up a storm
raining silver and gold dreams
shimmer words shining
treasures to share with others
precious thoughts with pen and ink

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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dgvarner
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20 posted 2003-04-18 01:56 AM


scribble hearts desire
on butterfly wings, desire
soar with wild blue winds



hugs,g

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people"  - victor borge

passing shadows
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21 posted 2003-04-18 02:44 AM


this, from me to you
let me tell you of my life
love, hate, pleasure, pain

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22 posted 2003-04-19 11:59 PM


Poet?
Am I just that,
or a lifeguard on the reef break
of life?

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