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littlewing
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0 posted 2003-04-16 09:10 PM



Jigsaw
zig zag
rough cut
watch the blade
band saw
circular sun
cut me please
until I become
puzzle pieces
made of clay
scattered
to be gathered
whole
one day


© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2003-04-16 09:18 PM


Hi sue. I know of this.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (04-16-2003 09:18 PM).]

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-04-16 09:19 PM


May the pieces be gathered pronto! A real sharp edge to this poem! Sort of a Humpty Dumpty feel to it--only much starker.

PS

Where's your photo? I miss seeing your magnanimous smile!

May tomorrow be a better day, Dear One!

Warm, loving hugs,
EA

dreambuilder
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3 posted 2003-04-16 09:43 PM


you described me - just a few pieces missing or marred - between dogs, kids, & women lol

seriously though - from reading your poetry - it is a masterpiece in the making

amazing write - look forward to more
      
& ps ... wheres that beautiful pic - it used to brighten my day

. . . all that we see is but a dream within a dream  . . .

Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-04-16 09:52 PM


I agree with dreambuilder, a masterpiece in the making I'd love to see complete
brian sites
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5 posted 2003-04-16 11:33 PM


smile....

breathe......

this is terse.....tense

and well said

you are stretching...

shatter and remade...yes
this is sooo good

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-04-16 11:40 PM


Sue, I like the honesty with which you write.
I can feel your words when I read. Best wishes, little one.  
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

(Pssstt!!  i miss the picture, too. Where is it?)

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-04-17 02:55 AM


Rose - Thank you - I needed that hug

EA - I'm a trying to get that puzzle together - what a nice thing to say about my smile - as for the px - well . . . TY

dream - what sweet words you have for me - TY and I didnt realize that could brightened someones' day . . . glad it did

Raph - you have helped to complete a lot of that you know . . . sweet words for me . . . thank you  
(you do agree with ALL of what dream says right lol) *smile*  

Bri - from you - I am so pleased with myself then . . . stretching yes - needing to be brought back . . . thank you        

Ethel:  heheh little one - I like that and am glad I make you feel - always from my heart they are and so sweet - a kiss on the cheek up there - just what I needed.  
Wow - you miss my picture too - well  . . .

Thanks guys xxoo


[This message has been edited by littlewing (04-17-2003 06:05 AM).]

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-04-17 03:24 AM


perfect! I understand completely Sue
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9 posted 2003-04-17 07:07 AM



Zip zap
great read!

dreambuilder
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caddyshack
10 posted 2003-04-17 07:05 PM


bump - bump
Black Swan
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11 posted 2003-04-17 09:24 PM


words as cutting as the blade! well done! ~Talia
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12 posted 2003-04-17 09:28 PM


Sharp write - most enjoyable and cleverly presented.
littlewing
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13 posted 2003-04-18 09:24 AM


Thanks Dixie - always need you here . . .

Sun and Dream - thank you so very much!
thanks for the bump dream

Talia & Spirit - hehe nice replies

Thank you guys for reading xxoo

vandana
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14 posted 2003-04-18 06:41 PM


enjoyed
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15 posted 2003-04-18 07:29 PM


I think I shall make it a point to read more of your work, Littlewing!

enjoyed.

Sunkissed.

silvergriffinfire
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16 posted 2003-04-18 08:15 PM


i liked it alot - off to read more of yours

Descendus Averno Facillis Est

littlewing
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17 posted 2003-04-19 06:16 AM


vandana Sun and Griffin - thank you so much - too good to me   xxoo
KoKo
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18 posted 2003-04-19 10:15 AM


This is amazing, I can't put into words how much I loved this

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

littlewing
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19 posted 2003-04-20 03:39 PM


Thanks KoKo - xxoo
passing shadows
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20 posted 2003-05-25 01:54 AM



inkedgoddess
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21 posted 2003-06-06 12:13 PM


pick me up, put me back together,,,,,,,,,
it all comes and goes.......
one day at a time, yes, if only,

........thanks, missed you, too over here

littlewing
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22 posted 2003-06-07 02:29 PM


Thanks Michele - you got it
missed you too
xxoo

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23 posted 2003-06-07 06:53 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I have felt broken like this before and believe there is no more rewarding feeling than seeing someone have the heart to kneel down and put you back together again! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

icebox
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24 posted 2003-06-08 12:16 PM


This is very impressive.  As sharp as the blades.  Thank you for waking me up when all I wanted to do was sleep.
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25 posted 2003-06-08 12:34 PM


Seems like you described us all at one time or another...well done. Hoope you get things together soon.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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26 posted 2003-06-08 12:56 PM


You are probably going to think me crazy but I skip for exercise and wrote this down and and going to use it to skip to, if I say it over and over as a type of mantra, it may remind me never to become so weak as to let anyone fracture me every again!  Can you tell I love this I do!

                        

littlewing
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27 posted 2003-06-08 01:13 AM


Noah - dry those tears please TY
Ice - did you want to sleep? lol - very cool - I opened your eyes a bit?
Sky - Im ok - now I am - I think . . .

Mysteria - very cool and no I dont think its weird . . . ( backing away slowly) lol

thanks guys xxoo

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