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Sunkissed
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0 posted 2003-04-16 03:07 PM



Family Night


Me & my girls-
10 and 2 respectively-
out on the town for a
yee-ha time dropped by
Bob's grocery to liven up
the ride with a bag
of cool ranch doritos
somewhere between the dip
& the chip when the grandfather
clock in the old square chimed
we saw him, tall & handsome
smiling from here to there with
a dozen roses in hand
Now I may be just a  country
girl, old fashioned & sweet
but didn't that just sweep me
off my feet?


Sunkissed.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-04-16 03:18 PM



Now...in a sense...I've been here...
and here is good!  I'm smiling,
and enjoying the trip down
memory lane...

this was upbeat
it was good
it's SMILING...


SPIRIT
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2 posted 2003-04-16 05:58 PM


This is great fun. I answered the challenge too, it's in Corner Pub. Thought this was an excellent challenge, I like the list of words to work with - you did very well indeed.
Ericc
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3 posted 2003-04-16 07:34 PM


Great job!
Eric

Justbleu
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4 posted 2003-04-30 02:08 PM


I didn't know you wrote this.....
Very nice!!!!
Those words mean a lot to me!!!!
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

[This message has been edited by Justbleu (04-30-2003 02:45 PM).]

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just out of reach
5 posted 2003-04-30 02:36 PM


Enjoyed this!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Sunkissed
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6 posted 2003-04-30 05:40 PM


Thanks everyone for your kind comments.

Justbleu, it was all for you! Glad that you liked...


Sunkissed.

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