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vladacar
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0 posted 2003-04-16 01:39 PM


Hello everyone,

Let’s play and write a story or a poem. Please add a word, phrase or thought. So, please, hit reply, copy the text that already exists (last edited) and write a dash (-) and then your thought. Please limit yourself to 2-3 words. Use signs of punctuation if you want. I am looking forward to see results… Please consider other people thoughts and contribute with yours.  Thanks. I will start.


- I HAVE BEEN  


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KoKo
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1 posted 2003-04-16 01:51 PM


hmm..this seems interesting...?

"I have been awake for hours..."

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Thomas119gold
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2 posted 2003-04-16 02:22 PM


"I have been awake for hours..."- Afraid to dream
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3 posted 2003-04-16 02:56 PM


"I have been awake for hours..."- Afraid to dream.  Thoughts of you
Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-04-16 05:09 PM


"I have been awake for hours..."
- Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
*Pervade my serene...

~*~

Welcome to Passions!  It seems like you are a ready and willing participant!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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state of mind
5 posted 2003-04-16 05:26 PM


"I have been awake for hours...
- Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
*Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
Bernie

Welcome to passions

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Kahlil
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6 posted 2003-04-16 08:18 PM


"I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
*Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind.

Fun idea, welcome!

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just out of reach
7 posted 2003-04-16 09:45 PM


"I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
*Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches


           Welcome to Passions!! Chris

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8 posted 2003-04-16 10:09 PM


"I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
*Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..


~Welcome to Passions, Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

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9 posted 2003-04-16 10:47 PM


"I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...

Sunshine
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10 posted 2003-04-17 11:25 AM


"I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...
But lo, there runs the might stream...

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2003-04-17 06:36 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, I just love how interactive your beautiful debut is, sweet friend, yay, I'm about to join too, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



Now, time to add on, yay!

"I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...
But lo, there runs the might stream...
Sauntering like a somnabulist in these prisms

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery.

***Shakira***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-17-2003 06:38 PM).]

QjQ
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12 posted 2003-04-18 08:58 PM


I enjoyed reading your write!
          >>QjQ<<
forward to reading  more!

Sunshine
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13 posted 2003-04-19 08:59 PM


"I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...
But lo, there runs the mighty stream...
Sauntering like a somnabulist in these prisms
between, betwixt fraud's realisms

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Gaia
14 posted 2003-04-19 09:07 PM


"I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...
But lo, there runs the mighty stream...
Sauntering like a somnabulist in these prisms
between, betwixt fraud's realisms
and stark reality's screams
WELCOME!

Ringo
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15 posted 2003-04-19 10:12 PM


have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...
But lo, there runs the mighty stream...
Sauntering like a somnabulist in these prisms
between, betwixt fraud's realisms
and stark reality's screams
*Twisting, turning, tearing my thoughts*

When the morning cries and you don't know why...

passing shadows
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displaced
16 posted 2003-04-20 03:20 AM


I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...
But lo, there runs the mighty stream...
Sauntering like a somnabulist in these prisms
between, betwixt fraud's realisms
and stark reality's screams
*Twisting, turning, tearing my thoughts*
a hurricane and anchored yachts

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (04-20-2003 03:22 AM).]

life
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17 posted 2003-04-20 07:34 AM


I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...
But lo, there runs the mighty stream...
Sauntering like a somnabulist in these prisms
between, betwixt fraud's realisms
and stark reality's screams
*Twisting, turning, tearing my thoughts*
a hurricane and anchored yachts
*set free in the ocean of dreams*

luvs
life

friendship is unnecessary...like philosophy...like art
it has no survival value...rather it is one of those things that gives value to survival...

Sunshine
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18 posted 2003-04-20 08:01 AM


I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...
But lo, there runs the mighty stream...
Sauntering like a somnabulist in these prisms
between, betwixt fraud's realisms
and stark reality's screams
*Twisting, turning, tearing my thoughts*
a hurricane and anchored yachts
*set free in the ocean of dreams*

Then comes the moment of great relief...

dreambuilder
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caddyshack
19 posted 2003-04-21 01:30 PM


I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...
But lo, there runs the mighty stream...
Sauntering like a somnabulist in these prisms
between, betwixt fraud's realisms
and stark reality's screams
*Twisting, turning, tearing my thoughts*
a hurricane and anchored yachts
*set free in the ocean of dreams*
Then comes the moment of great relief...
as I'm delivered from endless grief

. . . all that we see is but a dream within a dream  . . .

Lady In White
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20 posted 2003-04-21 04:43 PM


I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...
But lo, there runs the mighty stream...
Sauntering like a somnabulist in these prisms
between, betwixt fraud's realisms
and stark reality's screams
*Twisting, turning, tearing my thoughts*
a hurricane and anchored yachts
*set free in the ocean of dreams*
Then comes the moment of great relief...
as I'm delivered from endless grief
then stumble upon a great belief...

Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes
21 posted 2003-04-21 05:13 PM


I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...
But lo, there runs the mighty stream...
Sauntering like a somnabulist in these prisms
between, betwixt fraud's realisms
and stark reality's screams*Twisting, turning, tearing my thoughts
a hurricane and anchored yachts*set free in the ocean of dreams
Then comes the moment of great relief...
as I'm delivered from endless grief
then stumble upon a great belief...
Of being alone while being with you
****************************

This is turning out to be interesting... but do you have anything of your own to share???

When the morning cries and you don't know why...

vandana
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22 posted 2003-04-21 07:12 PM


i have been awake....interesting!!!!!!!! (hugs)
littlewing
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23 posted 2003-04-21 08:17 PM


dang - nice job guys  and V?

Nice Entrance . . .  you will make some waves I am sure . . .

Welcome to PIP!

xxoo

Kahlil
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Posts 1881

24 posted 2003-04-21 08:24 PM


I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...
But lo, there runs the mighty stream...
Sauntering like a somnabulist in these prisms
between, betwixt fraud's realisms
and stark reality's screams*Twisting, turning, tearing my thoughts
a hurricane and anchored yachts*set free in the ocean of dreams
Then comes the moment of great relief...
as I'm delivered from endless grief
then stumble upon a great belief...
Of being alone while being with you
I thought that I had lost myself

scorpio
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right...there
25 posted 2003-04-21 08:26 PM


I have been awake for hours...
Afraid to dream.  
Thoughts of you
"Pervade my serene..."
Of the pictures you create
In my mind
Lonely heart aches
Into the empty night..
Finally drifting off into sleep, I dream...
But lo, there runs the mighty stream...
Sauntering like a somnabulist in these prisms
between, betwixt fraud's realisms
and stark reality's screams*Twisting, turning, tearing my thoughts
a hurricane and anchored yachts*set free in the ocean of dreams
Then comes the moment of great relief...
as I'm delivered from endless grief
then stumble upon a great belief...
Of being alone while being with you
holding you the whole night through

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