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Sunkissed
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0 posted 2003-04-16 09:28 AM




Through the hedge of the
proud, I've seen weakness
beneath the surface of the
confident smile, I see a babe
The parade is indeed magnificent
the charade, so apparently cover
so many sparkling eyes, fooled
& blind- hover
hoping to catch the indifference
of those "better" for their own
chance to shine- a universal desire
still, I pray for humility
& continue to be lesser so that
I might see...


Sunkissed.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-04-16 09:59 AM


...this runs...
and it carried me right with it...

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-04-17 07:18 PM


Sun:
in my head with this one

You do see . . .
xxoo

Sunkissed
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3 posted 2003-04-18 11:37 AM


Sunshine & Little Wing, thank you both for reading and always better yet, discerning...

Sunkissed.

QjQ
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4 posted 2003-04-19 03:38 PM


I enjoyed reading your write!
          >>QjQ<<
looking forward to reading  more!

Sunkissed
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5 posted 2003-04-19 05:31 PM


Thank you, QJQ...

Sunkissed.

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2003-04-19 06:56 PM


This write was sparkling with self confidence, and a deep understanding of the differt drives of the masses.  Enjoyed.
TD

vandana
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7 posted 2003-04-19 07:08 PM


enjoyed
Sunkissed
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8 posted 2003-04-19 10:23 PM


TD, thank you for reading me in this...

Good to see you!

Verdana, thank you for reading and commenting.  It's always appreciated!

Sunkissed.

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-04-20 03:38 AM


a write from the heart~
passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-05-31 01:40 PM



Sunkissed
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11 posted 2003-06-12 10:45 AM


PS,you're awesome.


Sunkissed.

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