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Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-16 01:36 AM

Hollow becomes
my time to swallow them
tortured flavor
asking for cupid's favor

Dripping heat from
hearts oraphus
the magnolia warns
me of trust so treacherous

Melting sowrrow down
by flaming passion of need
the shameful wax
drips upon beggining's seed

Grass so mellow
drinks of forgiving rain
moments glide like butterflies on the wind
sheets on the closeline dry and wave

Opening blinds
my eyes sting with truth
forgetting lines
from that song we knew
I used to sing it with you

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-04-16 09:20 AM

I love your use of words that draw pictures to describe thoughts or emotions. Reading it I could identify with my sadnesses....

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-04-19 01:05 AM

powerfull write you have right here. this is going into my library..i really enjoyed this, thanks

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-04-19 01:26 PM

I enjoyed reading your write!
>>QjQ<<
looking forward to reading more!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-04-19 01:31 PM

one of those beautifully sad ones I so love!

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

5 posted 2003-04-30 10:09 AM

Interesting.....
Enjoyed this!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-04-30 03:23 PM

enjoyed this very much

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

7 posted 2003-05-08 02:55 PM

hi i say to you the person that i tlak to. lol
Whats going on i found a way to get to the internet. i'm no longer going to go crazy.
well anyway i like this one it reminds me of a lot of things and the pictur that it puts in my mind reminds me for your room alot i don't know what maby because i see the tings that you describe i like this. ttyl Matt

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