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KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-04-16 12:05 PM

Every night I crawl beneath your arm.
I smell your scent, eyes closed,
And for a moment all I can smell is you.
And that's perfect.

Every night I crawl into that spot
You like me to stay
You know the one...
The dirty little corner.
You say I'm safe there
And out of your way.

Every night I kiss the tears upon my cheek
With my fingertip
So light...
It still burns
From where you hit me.

And every night I sleep
In memories of you
Because with all my broken heart
I love you.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-04-16 12:51 PM

Goodness I FELT this one
lovely write but aching . . .

xxoo

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-04-16 01:44 AM

Thank you littlewing -hugs-

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Bombella
Junior Member

since 2003-04-10

Posts 19
Western Australia

3 posted 2003-04-16 02:08 AM

This is very heart-wrenching. Bitter sweet love is known by me also. I enjoyed the read.
Cherie..

[This message has been edited by Bombella (04-16-2003 02:09 AM).]

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

4 posted 2003-04-16 02:12 AM

Thanks Cherie

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2003-04-16 03:04 AM

love does NOT hurt !!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-04-16 04:44 AM

Is this a true story? James

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

7 posted 2003-04-16 10:40 AM

lol, you're right 1slick_lady.
James: Yes, it is. But it is not about me. It's about a good friend of mine and sadly, I have tried everything I can to wake her up from this illusion...But she's so stubborn...like people in this situation often are. ~sighs~
Thanks for your comments everyone.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-04-16 01:03 PM

sitting in thought...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2003-04-16 03:36 PM

A sad story Koko...friends around her like you that expose her to the truth, to reality will be of value to her...James

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

10 posted 2003-04-16 03:43 PM

Thank you James, I'll keep that in mind

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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