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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-04-15 06:48 PM



Gently
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Gently
Touch this woman
Tenderly make her swoon
Hold her beneath the cresting moon
Take her higher than she has ever been
Among the starlight now in shine
Make sure she knows your love
Is for always
Gently~
Kiss her sweet lips
Set her dear heart afire
She will return what she receives
You will be richer, far beyond compare
She wears your love for all to see
You’re the man of her dreams
She will be yours
~Gently

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-04-15 06:53 PM


Very beautiful in content and presentation.
Softly romantic.
Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2003-04-15 06:54 PM



Marge, my friend...you know.
Love ya,
~Me

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-04-15 06:58 PM


Margherita~
Thank you so much for the lovely comments.

VICKY~
Now, you see I got your e-mail !
Will this do for your 'inbox' ?
I thought so !
This one's for you gal !!!!!!!!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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4 posted 2003-04-15 07:01 PM


Ohmygosh!!  This is so beautiful Marge!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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5 posted 2003-04-15 07:02 PM


Awwwww
vlraynes
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6 posted 2003-04-15 07:08 PM



Thank you, Margie...I knew.
You're the bestest.
~Me

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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7 posted 2003-04-15 07:11 PM


Absolutely stunning...This poem, of yours, is Romantically perfect...I love it...

Martie
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8 posted 2003-04-15 07:39 PM


Marge/sis...A lovely gift of friendship, a poem!  
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9 posted 2003-04-15 08:57 PM


Marge:

this is pure heaven . . .

xxoo

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10 posted 2003-04-16 12:13 PM


Dear Marge:  So tender and lovely!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2003-04-16 12:29 PM


Marge, this is so beautiful.
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12 posted 2003-04-16 01:39 AM


The softer side of Marge..... I hope we see this more often, because it's simply beautiful.

This poem is going into my library.

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13 posted 2003-04-16 01:40 AM


Correction -- this poet is going into my library.

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14 posted 2003-04-16 01:53 AM


Marge, you know that I love this
rictameter...and a double one at that!!!
Now, I also loved the content, too. It has
such a soft and gentle feel to it, friend.
So beautiful.
Hugs,
Ethel


(Psssttt....I'm going to have to try one of these double-rictameters. This looks like fun)

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15 posted 2003-04-16 10:46 AM


You know what it takes to leave mouthy here speechless? *S* You must... you've done it. *S* Beautiful! *S*
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16 posted 2003-04-16 10:49 AM


Oh Ms. Marge ... this made me feel all warm, snuggly and loved. Beautiful sentiments and we can't ask for much more than this!

I emailed it to my Hon. He'll probably coming running home from work.  

Hugs and a very Happy Easter.  Marti

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17 posted 2003-04-16 10:49 AM


Lovely!

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Betty
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18 posted 2003-04-21 08:38 PM


This is sooo pretty.
Betty

Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2003-04-23 10:49 AM


Thanks to each of you for your lovely replies.
Sorry I let this one slip by without responding to many of you.
I apologize~

I LOVE the creative flow of the rictameter ... and this one is 'special'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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