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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-04-15 06:31 PM


Word Tease


Words don't always mean what they say,
although I have tried to make mine clear.
"You are more complex than you think you are"
is what he has said to me, sincere.

I've thought about the meaning of words
and usually take his and twist them around.
Sometimes for fun or to just get a rise
and then I await his return or rebound.

I know that he knows that I know how to be,
in otherwords I know the way to his mind.
So I tease and I wind all my words to perplex
and always tomorrow, attention I'll find.

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Startime55
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1 posted 2003-04-15 07:21 PM


OH WELL SAID....WONDERFUL!! What a great way with words...LOL...keep it up...

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-04-15 08:23 PM


hehehehe sneaky thing
nice job with this xxoo

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-04-15 11:43 PM


Maureen, this is really good. Larry
is going to like it, too.  
Hugs,
Ethel

SmartChick
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4 posted 2003-04-16 12:31 PM


Tis is really good. I know Larry will like it.
vlraynes
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5 posted 2003-05-30 02:04 AM



*Bump*...because Larry missed it.

This is cute, Maureen.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
6 posted 2003-05-30 02:11 AM


Hey Maureen I think you think us guys are complex because you women are complex but we're quite straightforward. Yaeh just simple people.......
All we want is a beer and to see something naked!

[This message has been edited by ethome (05-30-2003 02:12 AM).]

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-05-30 03:06 AM


cool write!
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-05-30 04:43 PM


E, you make me laugh...this was one I thought slipped by *s..I am just so moody
aren't I?

Well  if you  forget the beer, the rest would be enough for me *s

And Larry probably still won't see this

Thanks you guys
M

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