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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-04-15 05:00 PM

Up Close

I've seen you up close and
I've watched you from afar.
I feel like I know you but
only you and your loved ones
know who you really are.
You're fascinating to me.
I enjoy the woman that I see.
I value your concern for me.
Your graceful beauty and
your gentle personality.
My heart yearns to
tell you how I feel.
When I see you up close
I realize that you're
among the most
beautiful women
in this world.

JamesLee
April15
2003

© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

1 posted 2003-04-15 05:17 PM

just lovely, thanks for sharing

~Talia

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-04-15 10:30 PM

damn i loved this

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-04-15 10:32 PM

Very very lovely James.
Lucky lady!

~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

karebear07
Member

since 2003-04-15

Posts 64
Texas

4 posted 2003-04-15 10:33 PM

Very very sweet.
-kara <><

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

5 posted 2003-04-17 03:53 AM

yay! I loved the romantic flair in this!
excellent
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

life
Junior Member

since 2003-04-14

Posts 36
India

6 posted 2003-04-17 08:31 AM

wonderful!!!!~~~~
i m in love with this

ps: smile it makes me smile

friendship is unnecessary...like philosophy...like art
it has no survival value...rather it is one of those things that gives value to survival...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-04-17 08:53 AM

Up close inspection
sometimes does not reveal
as much as we think we
want to see...except
in instances
such as
this...

Very nice, James...

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

8 posted 2003-04-18 10:16 PM

Tell her, tell her! No woman could resist those beautiful words.

-Patricia

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Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-04-18 11:01 PM

James, you really are one of
us hopeless romantics, you know?
That's a good thing, though.

Hugs,
Ethel

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-04-19 04:04 AM

James - this IS beauty . . . xxoo

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