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0 posted 2003-04-15 02:30 PM







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lazy afternoon
windchimes singing lullabyes
sunshine warms my face
as I bask in springtime's bliss
treasuring idle repose ~

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Chris Barker
April 2003
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1 posted 2003-04-15 02:34 PM








(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, both your beautiful sun-shining words and the cute adorable picture made me smile, yay! (kiss on cheek) May this spring bring many blessings your way, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Now here is my childhood!  Here is my today, as a matter of fact - a warm sun to freckle my face, a favorite book upon which to travel, a loving dog to go with me...and windchimes to soothe my psyche...

did you write this just for me?  No?  Ah well, then, I must share...

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This is a lovely tanka, Chris.
Beautifully done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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4 posted 2003-04-15 02:48 PM


Noah, Awww...look at that sweet pic..awww..hugs to you sweetie!

Karilea - Of course this was written for you      And it was written for everyone who enjoys doing absolutely nothing on a gorgeous afternoon.   hugs!!

Vicky - Thankyou so much for reading and commenting! hugs

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Basking in the bliss of spring...listening to the sounds of windchimes....how lovely...I enjoyed this poem Chris..

believe in what your heart feels...

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6 posted 2003-04-15 03:45 PM


Thankyou scorpio.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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Ahh Chris...this is perfect for today!
Just wish I could have sat outside in it longer
instead of running around here and there.
Hopefully it's the first of many many beautiful Spring days.
I can hear my windchimes too.
~Hugs & Miss ya, Teed~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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9 posted 2003-04-15 05:07 PM


Nothin like just lazin on a sunny afternoon...James
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Chris, this is lovely and what a cute picture.   I have my door open right now and can hear my windchimes out on the patio.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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11 posted 2003-04-15 06:48 PM


vandana, Nancylee, James & Michael, thankyou all so much for reading and commenting. Seems we all enjoy lazing around listening to the tinkle of windchimes. hugs!!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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12 posted 2003-04-15 08:10 PM


At last, I can almost taste the summer air, feel the river wash away my winter weary.

Ahhhh.

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13 posted 2003-04-15 08:17 PM


Chris:

This is lovely - can hear the chimes . . .
feel the sun and have a book in my hand on that bench . . .  TY   xxoo

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14 posted 2003-04-15 08:31 PM


wranx & littlewing - I am so glad that this touched each of you with pleasure.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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15 posted 2003-04-15 08:44 PM


You do these tanka's very well, Chris. And, the picture is just perfect.
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16 posted 2003-04-15 08:45 PM


What a lovely thought and poem, Chris!  
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17 posted 2003-04-15 09:23 PM


Sue & Martie - thankyou dear ladies!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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