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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Too much sun Too much For everythIng The sky The love Too much You love me Too much I love you too much You never know What Is? Too much Rainy days And winter nights Cold and hot Too much Too much Crimson love Crismson sky Sun comes and goes Rain falls Love calls Everything too much Too much Love is too much Sometimes We have to .... Love is too much tooo much.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and other times, just enough...  very nice, Vandana...very nice! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It can be that way, can't it? ....but somehow when it comes to this particular subject, even too much seems to be not enough.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow!! So well done Vandana. Yes..at times it feels like it can be too much. But most of the time...just right.  ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Excellent vandana ... and sometimes it is never enough! Hugs for Peace. Marti |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
so that is what that feeling is I get when I'm in love. That feeling like my heart is going to burst from my chest and like I can't sit still for one moment? Tooooo much love.... :-) gotta love it LOL Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh vandana....I can feel this one...just a beautiful write...I can never get too much of your writing. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
LOVED this!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, this is so good, it is just tooo much!!!! It really is a nice poem, and I really enjoyed reading it, dear friend. My love with my Gary always seems just right!!! LOL Heart Hugs,  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Vandana, love is all you need and so is indeed so much yet if you moderate it to heart, it will always feel comfortable! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Vandana.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vandana...Lots of emotional power felt in this. Well done! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
vandana - this is awesome: You love me Too much I love you too much You never know What Is? Too much The eternal question - should have booked this . . . xxoo |
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