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Seeds of Love

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Seymour Tabin
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Seeds of Love

A breathing sigh sleeps near by
Hair in sweeps pilled pillow high
A face of peace relaxed of day
Leased into a nights display.

How can I enter in her mind?
Light a light for her to find
Send a message to her thoughts
Anchor fancy in my port.

What rope of whisper could I vie?
To ride the air into her sigh
To pluck the strings within her heart
To start the music love imparts.

To make her dream a wile of tie
To take me in her dream of sigh
To hold me like a snow white dove
And feel the tender of her love

What wake of wick should I breathe?
To make this trick a true bequeath
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(sigh) JUst sow the wild oats in your heart and like goldfinches love will come and grace the flowerbeds you bestow before her! (big hugggsssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Noah,
Good morning friend and thank you.
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Sometimes, a simple touch is all that's needed--especially wrapped in your lovely words!!  Enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
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oh my gosh!  that is SO sweet :-)  I think all you would have to do is show her that poem and she would be yours for good LOL  

Great job!!

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Put this wonderful poem under her pillow and let the fragrance of this love enter her heart and her veins ...
you know the music of love, dear Seymour!
And the touch of the white dove is infinitely tender and fulfilling.
Love, Margherita
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A breathing sigh sleeps near by
Hair in sweeps pilled pillow high
A face of peace relaxed of day
Leased into a nights display.
==================================
What rope of whisper could I vie?
To ride the air into her sigh
To pluck the strings within her heart
To start the music love imparts.
===================================
What wake of wick should I breathe?
To make this trick a true bequeath

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me thinks theres gonna be a whole lot of SY-induced-sighing going on in here after reading this oh so lovely poetic sigh on high.
Good grief Stinky...hows a girl suppose to breath after reading this rhymed reprieve???

Oh well....breathing is over-rated *wink* *L*



and beyond the beauty of your whispered wish...I am giddy from the internal rhymes in this gem of pen...that first verse alone left me delightfully dizzy.


*ww*

  
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Ah how romantic dear Sy!
Can you not tell by that slight smile on her face
that she is already dreaming of you?
Your thoughts are her thoughts..
Tea's on love.
~morning hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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It's always lovely to see
your heart in spring,
to hope that the morn
will hear Iz sing...

~*~

Yep...a whole lot of sighs for Sy
this beautiful [albeit windy] spring morning...

Thank you, my friend!
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Sandpiper
I think you are right, thank you.

Kristie,
You are so sweet, thank you.

Margherita
I'll try under her pillow, thank you sweet.

JM,
You know sometimes I think I write just to get your replies. They are the music of my day. WWRS

Nancy,
Come to think on it there was sort of a smile on her face.
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  Seymour, you romantic you...

You  know that this hopeless romantic
absolutely loves this rhyme of love.

I know that your lady loves it, too.
AAAWWWW, you are so romantic. I'm going to keep this
one so that I don't have to look for it through
these busy blue pages.  

Heart Hugs,  
Ethel
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Sunshine
Did I see you smiling in your sleep?
Forgive Randy he gets that way sometimes.
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Oopsy-daisy
I forgot to keep it,
goofy me  
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Ethel,
You are the dearest,
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Yes, you did!
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Seymour - this a soft and lovely write for a spring morning. She could only have that smile on her face for you dear poet. Wildberry muffins to-day?! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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Chris,
Thank you dear,
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Sweet and romantic this morning Sy!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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scorpio
Never know what I'm gonna write once I start, LOL.
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enjoyed
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Thank you vandana
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Ah, so romantic, who could not love this.

Enjoyed greatly, Hugs, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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Oh Sy, Sy, Sy .... how beautiful and loving is this piece? Just a whisper, just a puff of breath in her ear should do it.

You are such the wonderful and consistent writer.

Hugs for Peace; you bring the Love. Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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Pat,
So glad you enjoyed. It was nice to write.
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Marti,
A beautiful reply, thank you.
 
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