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Against all ods !
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Against all ods ! |
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Dreamer@ Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 38Denmark |
Why do we hide ! In a world thats closed. Is it just so wide ! We feel like dozed. We choose a way ! Un till we find another. We are afraid to say ! We search for each other. We hope to find the peace ! In the heart of ourselves. But think of the world please ! We have to open our cells. Go your way to find the love ! Each and everyday we fight. To tell the world about the above ! Is that why we look at the stars at night. Love and honesty ! We have to live our life. Just forget a few promisy ! We need to be alive. [This message has been edited by Dreamer@ (04-15-2003 06:35 AM).] |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
Thats certainly why I look at the stars at night !  ~Talia |
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Dreamer@ Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 38Denmark |
Thanks talia for the words smile. Did you see taht you can change the sentences in another way in each verse. many things are hidden even in the light of the stars Dreamer@ Life is for mee to be ! |
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Crazy Eddie Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 178 |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely written, |
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