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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
You are The movement of the long rivers The shadow of the dark nights The heat of the sunlights The breath of my own air You are The moon light of the seas The lonely white rose in the gardens You are The deepest secrets of the life The only touch of softy hands You are The every love songs to sing And the only words of love to say YOU ARE MY LOVE Secretlife You Are My End Secret Life... Be Sure That I Can Be always With You... Through The Distances... Through Life Troubles... Me And You Is One... [This message has been edited by secretlife (04-15-2003 02:11 PM).] |
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Dreamer@ Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 38Denmark |
Smile ! It tells a hearted story smile wery deep words. What can more be said with words. Dreamer@ |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
You are... a great writer, I really enjoyed your poem how will i laugh tomorrow |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
when we love someone, they are our all...and you said it perfectly... great job Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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edh Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 111 |
You are the sun. You are the rain. That makes my life this foolish game. You need to know. I love you so. And I'd do it all again and again. |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Thanx every one for reading my words I am really glad for your opinions... Hugssssssssss Secretlife |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Secretlife, this is a beautiful love poem. Sorry that I didn't see it the first time around.  Hugs,  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautifully romantric, sweet friend, and you are a very special friend to all our hearts who has a sunshine smile of your own! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, may love always sing in you like the bluebird of happiness, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 beautiful |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
I am very glad to see you all here in my page.... Thanks alot Hugsssssss You Are My End Secret Life... |
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