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smalls
Member

since 2002-12-20

Posts 62

0 posted 2003-04-15 03:29 AM

My Reality’s Dream

In and out of my dreams
In and out of my realities.
Sometimes I wake to joy
Sometimes I sleep to pain.
Sometimes I wake to pain
Sometimes I sleep to joy.
Whatever my reality brings
My dreams tend to forget.
Whatever my dreams bring
My realities tend to remember.
My realities seek my dreams
My dreams run from my realities.
My reality’s dream…
In my dreams
Out of my realties.

Please check out my poetry online
http://mysite.de/mrlawrencesmalls/

Dreamer@
Junior Member

since 2003-04-13

Posts 38
Denmark

1 posted 2003-04-15 06:32 AM

First as i read your words i was abit confused but as i began to set them together and follow the hidden line i saw.

I found out they was like a brainstorm but they followed eachother like if every sentence was connected.

As like life everything is followed by things we do act and think like.

I enjoyed this one

smile

Dreamer@

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

2 posted 2003-04-15 08:30 AM

what we put in comes out :-) It was catchy at first, but after the second time I got it just the way you wrote it (I think)....

great! :-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

smalls
Member

since 2002-12-20

Posts 62

3 posted 2003-04-15 08:18 PM

Thanks you for your replies. It's funny how sometimes we write as if the other person can read our thorughts... I I am glad that you guys were abelt o understand it though... It's my reality wanting to be like my dream, therefore, it dreams to be so, hence the titel, eheheh. Thank you again and smiles as well.

Please check out my poetry online
http://mysite.de/mrlawrencesmalls/

Crazy Eddie
Member

since 2002-09-14

Posts 178

4 posted 2003-04-20 07:00 PM

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-04-20 07:04 PM

dreams n realities keeps us thinking

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

6 posted 2003-04-30 12:32 PM

In my realities I'm wanting to understand my dreams to help know my realites!!!
Enjoyed!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

7 posted 2003-06-22 12:25 PM

this is really thought provoking... good write

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

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