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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 04-15-2003 02:11 AM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell


looming in the air,
in which you breathe, i  stare.
sometimes if you dare.
I could even begin to care.

And I know it is you that I need,
and I know that it is you I see.

You know me like the wind,
YOu know me like the rain,
You know me better than the sun.
You know me, and that is all that matters.

I wish you loved me,
I wish you cared.

(`.) (`.)
  .(`.).
     *`..*
    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

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this hurts
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if it makes you feel any better, we've all felt like that at one time or another...

you did a wonderful job portraying your feelings...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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Ouch....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Marilyn
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The raw emotion of this comes through with few words.

Marilyn
Kellie_Cantrell
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5 posted 07-13-2003 03:47 AM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell

Whats really sad about this piece is that it is a lie in its entirity. The poem was written directly toward piptalk when in all reality i should have written it toward myself.

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             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
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