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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Sparrows Rush By: Noah Eaton 6/12/01 High upon the silent aerie This singing sparrow twitters naturally Resuscitating through song Desiring love all day long Blanketed by its Lord impenetrable calling Gracing with sister waft in dreamy gouatte Harmonizing with the forces of nature in the updraft Contributing to nature’s hosanna Resting in His hands and feeding on His seeds and granola Eliciting mine blessings in His lap The garden is but my only hideaway Nature my foster bride to whom I respectably relate Daffodil desires sousing cotton dreams Ruby-throated hummingbird cousins teasing the eglantines Hanging inside these halcyon days Whistling ‘neath the canopy at gloaming Feathered in the moonlight where I am dreaming Of flying with a sweetheart by my side Lovebirds cooing to one another for all our time Drinking from the holy birdbath together in this coterie Altruism my second wind, yet still a rudimentary sparrow Learning to love forever, bellowing to behold Sharing my nest with the sparrow of my heart Making the sparrows rush each day, God carrying us far And wearing my white crown high, hearing her heavenly scherzo  "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-14-2003 10:41 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Beautiful, Noah. Joyce |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, this is so pretty. I love birds of all kinds. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poems and pictures with us.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is truly beautiful Noah! And how I love your new picture!! ~Smiles and hugs to you my sidekick~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. I loved the way you discribed to sparrow.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very beautiful. Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Noah you always surprise me with your beautiful creations! Your words are like dancing sparrows ... a joyful celebration of life. Love, Margherita |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah, this is just lovely. I have sweet little sparrows nesting in our birdhouses in the garden. When the tiny babies poke their heads out of the opening...oh, too cute!! Look at you with your guitar and Shakira shirt on! Woohoo!! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, To this I would say elegant. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Ths songs of spring come to us from the birds...great write Noah...cool new pic too.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
The things you do with words, Noah!!! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
beautiful,noah one of your best |
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edh Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 111 |
Birds of a feather always stay together never separate no fear. Ooh can we see you. Ooh are we near you. How can you disappear, out of here. I wish for something. I wish you were here. Come home to me. Our day will come. Come home to me. Our day will come. Our day will come. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Noah, with each of your writes, I sit here in awe. I loved this and it gave me lots of new words. Hugs and Happy Easter my friend. Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very good Noah - and nice new photo, as well! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - you write of Sparrows well my friend... BC |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This is an incredible piece of writing, it really gets me. Into the library.... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Noah, somehow I missed this when you originally posted it. I have tons of sparrows in my backyard and they chirp away summer and winter. We feed them and although they make a terrible mess .... I just love to see and hear them. As always, wonderful writing. Hugs and Smiles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Noah, I see that you still have the way of words that many would envy. I always enjoy reading your works so much. They are always so full of emotion and animation. Wonderful write!! Kris The only one that can hold you back is yourself. |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
Noah, How wonderful, I read this and realized how much your poetry had evolved over the last year and a half. It is so wonderful to see the (complete adult voice) in your writing. Very very nice work. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Noah, I especially love the last stanza. Enjoyed, Hugs Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Noah, this is truly a beautiful poem as is your heart!!!!  Keep on writing...... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
beautiful imagery |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Noah my buddie, you are a fantastic writer ya know? This is great, and we are blessed to have you among us. Hugs. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful poem and pictures, Noah! believe in what your heart feels... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The garden is but my only hideaway Nature my foster bride to whom I respectably relate Daffodil desires sousing cotton dreams Ruby-throated hummingbird cousins teasing the eglantines Hanging inside these halcyon days ^ my favorite verse Noah. A very lovely portrait of contentment always shows in your words. hugsss M |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah I haven't been on here much lately due to other happenings in my life but I am so glad I found this beautiful piece of your heart. I adore birds and am always fascinated by them. I hope all is well with you. "Happiness is a perfume you cannot pour onto others without getting a few drops on yourself" Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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