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Swamp Faerie
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Swamp Faerie |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Tangled deep within Hallow lies Strangling beneath vines Of depression I still smirk A nonchalant smile When strangers pass me by Sanity not quite in tact But I know I'll make it A modern day ugly duckling Surrounded by filth Covered with pain Always pressing on To face another day Even in a world filled with oppression I will always have The utmost determination I might be stuck within this swamp Covered knee deep in my mind But you will always See the Sparkle and spunk within my eyes I'm nothing but a swamp faerie With the thirst for life.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (04-14-2003 07:37 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful book submission. ~Hugs~  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ceinwyn~ I really enjoyed reading this. A very nicely written piece. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful write. Gets my vote! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) And you are a precious fairy that will soar out of the swamp and soar to the castles over the rainbows, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is a gorgeous submission, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bombella Junior Member
since 2003-04-10
Posts 19Western Australia |
Thoroughly enjoyed! Cherie.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Hey what's this? Sounds like..oh..what's that word starts with an O..Op..optometrist..no no...um oh yeah optimism..grin Hugs feel better..someone should |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris - now this is what I like to see Sanity not quite in tact But I know I'll make it Yes . . . you will Good for you and good luck loved this xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good for the book! |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
ceinwyn,this is really good it got my vote Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I enjoyed the thought of a swamp faerie..then the whole poem was a delight..thank you! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes very good....One of your best! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
~echos Martie~ I hate it when people steal my unspoken words lol ;ÞAnyways, this is great. You have my vote. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
enjoyed that..back to the top with you  hugs, g "If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen |
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